100 50 Word Challenge: Week 15
We rush through the season and head towards Christmas,
The autumn leaves start to fall and I can kick them to the sky
Or hunt through the piles for conkers
And when I’m done I wander home
Snuggle up with a book and my slippers
And ignore the cold outside.
Lovely writing Hannah. This is really different to your usual style – it’s good to see you being adventurous.
I know it is different lol. But it still works which is cool. It did take some editing as I was on 51 + the three prompt words.
Only 1 word over on 1st draft is pretty good! Just noticed last sentence of my comment didn’t show up. It should also have said “I really enjoyed reading it.”
Perfect ending…I wonder how many try to ignore the cold? Robin
I like the way an adventurous side and a home-loving side come together here. I feel like this, too!
That’s just how I see autumn! This is a very comforting piece. Great to have you along this week despite the reduced words!
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