So I’ve seen this challenge posted both on Ian‘s and Sally‘s blogs but never got round to doing it – but this time I did. It took me a few attempts as the first attempt was about 160 words and I hadn’t even mentioned the prompt! DOH! Then I edited and changed bits and got it down to 100. Tell me what you think. You can find the prompts here.
The air smelt musty and the cold chilled my arms. How did I always get myself into trouble like this? I was trying to do my job and then this. I needed to work out where I was. I sat myself up but my head started to swim, I had come into the church to shelter from the thunder storm outside. Then everything went black. I reached up to my head. My forehead was bleeding. I waited for my vision to clear and reached to my left, there was a body next to me but it was cold and metallic.
Excellent! Really like the feelings that you have put throughout this. I do hope you will become a regular on the 100WCGU!
Nice one Hannah – very spooky feel to it. I wonder what happened to bring this person to the church and what happened to make them lose consciousness? I really enjoyed reading it.
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